Foyinsi Adegbonmire

My Manuscript Wish List®

Hello!

I’m an Editor at Feiwel & Friends, an imprint of Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group.

Please note: The following are merely examples of the types of things I enjoy in storytelling, NOT the be-all-end-all of what is needed for a story to be “good” and not even a be-all-end-all list of all the things I enjoy. The more I do this job, the more I realize there are exceptions to everything, and I’ve certainly acquired stories I wouldn’t have thought I’d end up adoring. These are just some similarities shared by the stories I love.

Let’s get started, shall we? 🙂

I tend to lean toward commercial and high-concept novels in the middle grade (MG) and young adult (YA) fiction spaces. My go-to genres include contemporary, fantasy, science-fiction, and mystery but I’m also open to other genres/sub-genres (thriller, novel-in-verse, fairytale or fairytale retelling, etc.).

My main goal at the moment (November 2024) is acquiring a sweet MG friendship story, whimsical MG, and/or an HBCU Poly Romance!

Across MG and YA, I enjoy stories that:

  • Have very conversational narrative voices, especially if the voice is funny/humorous or sarcastic
  • Are generally lighthearted, though it’s fine if they touch on serious topics
    • I ah-dore stories that take big life questions and build a plot around them (like Neal Shusterman’s Unwind and Arc of a Scythe series).
  • Are based on the writer’s lived experiences and realities
  • Feature strong and healthy friendships, romances, and/or sibling relationships (for me, you can have conflict without toxicity)
  • Center characters who are part of historically underrepresented races/ethnicities/genders/orientations but aren’t “issue” books. In other words, stories that explore these cultures without the main conflict being about that aspect of the main character’s (or characters’) identity – though it can certainly still touch on and acknowledge the difficulties of being part of a marginalized community
  • Are lighthearted/exhibit Black Joy…please!!
  • Explore college/university life (still petitioning for New Adult to become a concrete category!)

In terms of genres for both MG and YA (and in no particular order):

  • Contemporary
    • Stories set in glamorous/elite prep schools
    • Boarding school stories that aren’t necessarily dark/thriller-esque (just kids dealing with the difficulties of forced proximity to different types of personalities)
    • Teen/kid spies or con artists (The Con Code)
    • Whacky/silly stories (Sideways Stories from Wayside School)
    • ROMANCE (especially romantic comedies!)
      • Stories with healthy relationship dynamics and particularly the kinds of relationships the YA market hasn’t seen nearly enough of in traditional publishing, such as (but certainly not limited to): Black love; polyamorous relationships; relationships involving transgender and/or non-binary characters; relationships involving ace characters; etc.
      • I love slow-burn stories—give me all the ~yearning~ and romantic tension
        • Other beloved tropes: friends-to-lovers, enemies(or rivals)-to-lovers, fake relationship/fake dating, oh-no-there’s-only-one-bed, etc.
  •  Fantasy
    • High-concept fantasy with lush, intricate world-building (the Pendragon: Journal of an Adventure Through Time and Space series) and clear magic systems (Children of Virtue and Vengeance)
    • Royalty (Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard)
    • Fantasy grounded in our world (Tristan Strong Punches a Hole in the Sky)
    • Stories set in our world with largely unexplained magical occurrences (Opposite of Always)
    • Fantasy in a futuristic setting
    • Fantasy with heart, humor, and a “classic” feel (How to Save a Queendom)
    • Absolutely stan Amari and the Night Brothers over here! It has the exact combination of magic, technology, and lightheartedness that I ADORE (and am looking for)
    • One of my dream acquisitions is a whimsical contemporary fantasy with a world that has the clever wordplay of Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland or The Phantom Tollbooth (NOT a retelling; the fun with words/language is the emphasis)
    • Another dream acquisition is slice-of-life stories that take place in high fantasy settings (bonus if the main plot is a romance). In other words, the high fantasy elements are simply facts of that world and nothing more so they aren’t the focus
  •      Science-fiction
    • Grounded sci-fi with super advanced technology (Iron Man, The 100 series)
    • Dystopia and time travel stories welcome (All Rights Reserved, The Hunger Games, The Reluctant Assassin, The Selection)
  •     Mystery/Detective
    • “Everyday”/regular life detective stories or adventurous action-packed mysteries welcome
    • Stories that involve puzzles, secret codes, etc. (Escape from Lemoncello’s Library, The Mysterious Benedict Society)
    • Psychological thrillers in the vein of How to Find a Missing Girl

Announced Acquisitions

Fun facts about me:

  • I’m Nigerian (Omo Yoruba)
  • I love GIFs and reaction pictures/videos (and rely on them heavily)
  • I’m a night person so yes, I may be on email at 2 in the morning…

Submission Guidelines

Agents: if you have a manuscript that may interest me or if you just want to connect, feel free to reach out!

Authors: At the moment, I only accept agented submissions/queries. Please do not query me directly unless included in a conference I participate in.